Hi Ryan, I really liked your elevator pitch. By using statistics you made your point even more realistic for listeners. I never really considered this opportunity until I started commenting on your posts and realizing how this device in the car can save lives. I have a good friend that got into a car accident because of a taillight being out and this device could have saved her a lot of pain. The way you carried the message was very professional and I think you did a good job in communicating your idea thoroughly.
your elevator pitch was very good. You presented your idea clearly and were able to include statistics which is important. You don't realize how many people are affected by this until you see the numbers. I always see cars on the road with a missing taillight or headlight and think of what a danger that is to others, especially driving at night. I know I have never checked my own taillight or headlight before getting in my own car and thats a problem. I think this would be a good solution.
Great elevator pitch! The set up was perfect making it look like you were talking to an auditorium! The tone was very influential and motivating. This product would help so many people from getting into accidents. I’m sure there are not many students that check their taillights on a monthly basis. This would also be a great product for scooters as well!
Hi Ryan,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your elevator pitch. By using statistics you made your point even more realistic for listeners. I never really considered this opportunity until I started commenting on your posts and realizing how this device in the car can save lives. I have a good friend that got into a car accident because of a taillight being out and this device could have saved her a lot of pain. The way you carried the message was very professional and I think you did a good job in communicating your idea thoroughly.
Hi Ryan,
ReplyDeleteyour elevator pitch was very good. You presented your idea clearly and were able to include statistics which is important. You don't realize how many people are affected by this until you see the numbers. I always see cars on the road with a missing taillight or headlight and think of what a danger that is to others, especially driving at night. I know I have never checked my own taillight or headlight before getting in my own car and thats a problem. I think this would be a good solution.
Great elevator pitch! The set up was perfect making it look like you were talking to an auditorium! The tone was very influential and motivating. This product would help so many people from getting into accidents. I’m sure there are not many students that check their taillights on a monthly basis. This would also be a great product for scooters as well!
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